VI Concurso de Produção Textual
Tema:
‘‘International year of Water Cooperation’’
Outstan
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Elemen
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Unidade
Barra
June/20
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1º Lugar
Produção Textual
Texto escrito por Manuela Schneider Viola de Sousa
3º Ano - Elementary III
FRESH WATER
To have a better world, we have to
have fresh water!
We can use fresh water to drink, to
take a shower, to cook, to brush teeth,
wash hands and to have fun!
With dirty water we can´t do anything!
And, it´s very dangerous, because we
can get sick. So, we have to take care
of water. We can´t pollute the rivers.
We have to take care of the nature!
How can we use water that is not
How can we use pollute water?
The water is very important to
everybody! Without water, we can´t
survive!
Without fresh water the world will not
be healthy!
Let´s save water and be happy!
1º Lugar
Produção Textual
Texto escrito por Caio Carpegiani de Figueiredo
4º Ano - Elementary IV
Yellow Submarine
In the sea where there are whales and
dolphins there was a lot of trash that
could kill the fish and water plants.
And the sea was polluted near the
lands of submarines.
So the fish died in the water because
the water was so dirty that it was
green.
And the whales and dolphins lived in
this water where there were
submarines.
What can we do?
We can´t let the whales and dolphins
die too, and we have to save the fish
and water plants. They are very
important to us.
So, we have to clean the Yellow
submarine, Yellow submarines,
Ye l l o w
s u b m a r i n e s , Ye l l o w
submarines
We have to clean the Yellow
submarines, Yellow submarines,
Yellow submarines!
Song by - Caio Carpegiani
1º Lugar
Produção Textual
Texto escrito por: Ana Carolina Joselli Falcão
5º Ano - Elementary V
Health Habits to prevent disease
Once upon a time...
There was a Family: Isabella,
Raphaella, Rodrigo and Julia.
Isabella and Raphaella were twins
and they didn't like to eat salad, fruits
or vegetables.
They loved fast food and soft drinks.
Rodrigo and Julia decided to tell a
story that happened in the United
States about obesity.
After the story…, they learned that
they have to live a healthy life. So, they
thought about it and said:
- We have to eat healthy foods!
- If we don´t eat healthy foods we will
get sick and probably die.
We learned a lot of things with this
story and everybody has to know that
it´s very important to:
Eat healthy foods like fruits,
vegetables and salad, wash our hands
before the meals, brush our teeth after
the meals, practice exercises to
prevent disease, don´t eat junk food
and be happy and love your life.
We have to drink 6 cups of water and
eat fruits and vegetables every day.
VERY
GOOD!!!